The Mason List: Let the Final Edits Begin

The Mason List: Let the Final Edits Begin

Yes, that’s right.  My wonderful editor Anna has sent her final edits.  No more passive verbs!  Aka my nasty little habit.  This is also a transition for me since I have been writing away on my second novel, Red Dirt Claws.  Emma hat off.  Alex hat on.  In other words, a drastic channel change from comedy to drama.

In Red Dirt Claws, I’m leaving Emma standing in her yellow bikini in front of Wyatt flirting her way right to his heart.  –Channel Change — To The Mason List where Alex begins her story with a mental breakdown in the opening scene.

Here’s what’s left in the process of getting The Mason List published.  The final edit is the next step.  I basically have two copies of the book right now.  One copy from my editor with all the grammatical, spelling and sentence structure clean-ups.  I have another copy that I have edited with story line and scene clean-ups.  I will be taking my final copy and merging pieces into the editor’s final copy.

For me, this is the most tedious part of writing a novel.  Line by line.  Word by word comparison of the two copies.  This story is approximately 137,000 words which is roughly 550 novel pages.  In Microsoft Word, my copy is 461 pages.

The picture below shows the side-by-side comparison.  The story begins at 8:15 pm.  Yes, that means what you think it means for my friends who know of my LOST obsession.  I slipped that little bread crumb into The Mason List.

I do most of my writing in Microsoft Word.  I also use WriteWay Pro.  The program is really good with organizing chapters and exporting out in manuscript form.  I spent the final six months of writing The Mason List in WriteWay Pro.  As each chapter comes to a close, I will be feeding the pieces back into that program.

Once I get a better grasp on the final pass through the novel, I should be able to schedule a release date.  I am very excited to introduce the world to The Mason List!Mason List Edits

On the Rack: Ugly Love

On the Rack: Ugly Love

Ugly Love by Colleen Hoover

Colleen Hoover might very well be replacing my love of Nicholas Sparks. That’s a very hard statement to make considering my long standing commitment to the guy. I have read almost all of Hoover’s books. I read Slammed in the first couple of months when it was first self-published. I found it by accident in the Kindle store and thought it seemed intriguing. I loved Slammed. Even more, I loved the story of the writer who came out of nowhere and started dominating the book lists. She is an inspiration to what can be accomplished in the self-publishing world. I honestly planned to list Slammed on The Book Rack as the first Colleen Hoover entry since it was my second self-published novel I ever downloaded.

Then I read Ugly Love.

Troubled and damaged people walk through our lives every day. They pass by everyone while hiding the pain they feel. They do this in order to survive until it becomes a way of life. The new normal. The new them.

Ugly Love is a modern day love story at its best. The sad Miles masquerading through life fooling everyone around him. He’s good at it until he meets Tate. Thus the Ugly Love begins with a person who fights to get through the façade.  With broken people, the ugly comes out with spikes and edges and glass ripping at anything that gets too close.  So the question remains for Tate.  How much are you willing to endure to stay close to the person who seems to need you the most?

This one brought me to tears so I can’t give the plane travel stamp of approval. However, this is a must read for all Colleen Hoover fans and dare I say it, for all Nicholas Sparks fans too! Find Ugly Love on Amazon here.

The Mason List Story Line in Pictures

The Mason List Story Line in Pictures

This picture reminded me of two things. The epic montage in the Disney movie Up and the over all epic story line of The Mason List.  It’s not the complete storyline so don’t worry about any spoilers.

Grow Old Together

 

 

 

 

 

 

 
 
 
 

Source Credit: Twitter Love Quotes

 

From the Red Chair: Characters

From the Red Chair: Characters

Characters make or break a story.  Larger than life.  Leaping off the pages.  Spinning around causing chaos.  Crashing into each other.

When I create characters, I keep an ongoing list of quirks, ticks, likes, dislikes and even a few pictures.  I use these items to create back stories.  It’s between the pieces of those items that I often find the real story that unfolds for the book.

I never intended The Mason List to spiral into the story that emerged when I clicked The End.  The back story of Alex took hold and transpired into the end game.  Her quirks and issues squashed everything.  It’s something that happened when I approached every scene with: how would this person with this back story react in such a situation.

With Red Dirt Claws, Wyatt and Emma are just starting to take shape.  I’m compiling those quirks and pictures to get a grasp on how they would react in the setting of the mystery surrounding Wyatt.  So live from the red chair…..characters.

Writing Song of the Day: Death Cab for Cutie – I Will Follow You into the Dark